nevarky's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SARDINEZ]

Great job dude! congrats!

[Smash Bros. Ok]

RIP/10

[Jeckster]

www.megajames.com

Screwits responds:

I support this.

[BabyGroundz]

Wow! Talking about newgrounds in 2013? way to throw old references, next time make a video making fun of autistics.

[BabyGrounds]

Wow, talking about newgrounds in 2013? way to throw old references.

[Dual Force]

Hey, good work man, it's not easy at all to put something this ambitious out, but I'm sure you already know that, this feels like a "whole".

Considering how long it is and the limitations you had, the animation is really good, it's nice to look at for the most part, maybe focus a little more in the background next time. I personally feel the story drags on for too long at some parts, but that may be just me.

You are definitely getting better at writing and animation, I feel like you made a huge leap since I last watched your stuff, looking forward to your future work.

Twisted4000 responds:

Thank you, nevarky. I feel the same way about the backgrounds during the scenes inside of buildings, kinda plain for the most part, I guess I sorta just got lazy, again having to due with how long this thing took me. And I think I also agree with the fact that the story occasionally stalls. But I'm glad you enjoyed it overall!

[Brominoe Effect]

The humor is not really my kind of thing, but the animation looks amazing, well done!

Kiigen responds:

Thanks, Nevarky. I appreciate that.

[Graduates]

Creo que en general estuvo muy bien, los ciclos de caminado te quedaron muy bien, en términos de animación es lo que más me gustó del corto, creo que en general podrÃ-as agregar un poco más de bounce y anticipación a la animación, pero puede ser que ya sea gusto propio.

Creo que tu estilo necesita evolucionar un poco, eres buen animador, pero tu estilo parece no ir a la par con la animación, dibuja mucho y trata de mejorar los pequepños detalles de anatomÃ-a.

Las actuaciones se me hicieron decentes, pero definitivamente es lo que más se puede mejorar del corto, especialmente las voces de los adultos que suenan a un chavo hablando como señor.

El humor estuvo bien, tuvo ritmo, no te basaste en memes o referencias a la cultura popular lo cual siempre se aprecia, fue un poco predecible, ya veÃ-a el final venir, pero creo que le diste un buen giro.

Sigue animando, vas por buen camino.

Lemuras responds:

Gracias, en verdad aprecio tu comentario ya que aprecio tu trabajo y se que puedo aprender de las cosas que me dices.
Un detalle que no entendi en tu comentario fue lo del "bounce y la anticipacion" a que te refieres exactamente :o, agradeceria mucho tu respuesta : ) y gracias por comentar este video

[Dancebreak!]

What can I say? Nothing to improve, it make laugh out loud and the artwork was perfect, never stop!

[Titanic the Musical]

It really needs a preloader, that is basic, the audio quality is pretty bad too, if you are not gonna focus on animation, at least try to focus on audio since it's important on your kind of movie, try to act a little more, the characters seem dead, not only because of the lack of animation, but also for the lack of acting and bad audio.

That said, I think I know what you were aiming for, and it wasn't a bad premise, just keep on polishing your skills, and good luck.